Passions Crimson Rose
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Passion flavors the soul
dancing in the light of passion
seductive in her ways,
swaying through the shadows
entangled in the ebb and flow,
driving her into the depths of
her soul.
Feeling the reverie
he swings her high and low,
she knows to always keep
on her toes.
It's a madness that
strikes every bone,
blood rushing through
her veins
adrenaline rushing
through the vines
that she beholds
thorns piercing
through her flesh
only the sunlight
bringing the true color
out of her soul.
Crimson red lips
observing her tango
hoping you'll let her go,
she knows the thorns
prick her sides as she grows
unfolding into a beautiful
young crimson rose.
(HMMS October 16, 2011)
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Thank you CloudExplorer appreciate the kind words, and savor them! Thanks for following! :)
"Crimson red lips
observing her tango
hoping you'll let her go"
Beautiful with such vivid imagery.
CloudExplorer Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago
Wow this hub was beautifully expressed, I love it when people fully utilize their ability to write creatively & especially with the usage of poetry and imagery. You have a great understanding of how to lay your hub out as well.
You got me following you now, to see the rest of your hubs eventually when I get to them.
Voted up for beautiful, & this felt as if you were speaking of a woman's pains & it ended smoothly as a Rose. Nice! One